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These are two poems I wrote maybe a year or so ago. I don't think I ever posted them on TGL before. (If I did, sorry!) I was thinking about elemental things with these and a few other poems I wrote at that time. Desire is pretty self explanatory. Explain The Sound was my effort to think about how sound affects thoughts and emotions.

Desire

Have just this.

Just one.

Won


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I like the idea of shimmering moving into simmering. Nice stuff! :mrgreen:

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Thanks!

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desire is supposed to be self explanatory right? but I cant seem to figure out the metaphore..the sound is perfectly transparent to me though

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Hi Pg! With Desire, it's "Desire" talking, urging us to indulge.

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